题目内容
8.今年,泉州市努力弘扬雷锋精神,提升市民素质,创建文明城市.作为泉州人,你能为泉州做点什么呢?请你以"I Can Make Quanzhou More Beautiful"为题写一篇80词左右的短文,让我们一起分享你的想法.温馨提示:短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称.
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分析 高分句型一:
So it's important for us to make it more beautiful.
句中使用句式为:it is+形容词+for sb to do sth.这句话意为:因此,对我们来说让它变得更漂亮很重要.
高分句型二:
If everyone can make a contribution to Quanzhou,it will be more beautiful in the future.
句中"If everyone can make a contribution to Quanzhou"为条件状语从句,使用短语有"make a contribution 做贡献".这句话意为:如果每个人可以为泉州做贡献,将来它会更漂亮.
解答 I Can Make Quanzhou More Beautiful
Quanzhou is a beautiful city that is famous in China.But something imperfect happens to it at times.So it's important for us to make it more beautiful.【高分句型一】(点明主题)
First,I should study hard to improve ourselves.Good education is important for a beautiful city.
Second,I should be a greener person.I must try my best to make our environment cleaner and quieter.I should plant more trees,save water and reduce pollution.
Third,I should be friendly and polite to others.When people are in trouble,I should help them as much as possible.I should obey all kinds of rules and set an example to others.(列举我能做的事情)
I believe"nothing is impossible".If everyone can make a contribution to Quanzhou,it will be more beautiful in the future.【高分句型二】(总结全文)
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注意:开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
| Dear Li Bing, I'm so sad.This morning on my way home I saw an old man lying on the ground.He was badly hurt.I quickly took him to the hospital.But his daughter thought it was me hurt his father and she said many dirty words and was very angry with me…I don't know whether I will help others in the future?Can you help me? Yours, Mike |
I have received your e-mail recently.I can understand you.I think you are right.I hope you can help others as possible as you can.【高分句型一】I can give you some advice.(开篇点题)
First when you meet such things,you'd better call 110 to ask the policeman for help.Besides you should try to explain to his daughter,I think maybe she didn't know the reason and was justtoo worried.What's more,don't think more about that.I think you did right,sooner or later she will understand you and thank you.(提出建议)
I hope you can go on helping people in trouble.If everyone can give a hand to others,the world will become more and more beautiful.【高分句型二】(再次阐述自己的观点).
I wish you are happy all the time!
Yours,
Li Bing.
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