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13．亲爱的同学们，快乐的初中生活即将结束．在这三年里，敬爱的老师们为我们付出了心血与关怀．请为你最爱的一位老师写一段毕业留言：他（她）给你留下的深刻印象、他（她）给你的鼓励和帮助以及你对他（她）最好的祝愿和思念之情等．
要求：1．可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）．
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校．
3．字数：90字左右．
Dear teacher，
I'm leaving school，but I will never forget your love．             ．
                                                                  Your student．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
When I was in trouble，you always encouraged me to have confidence．
句中"When I was in trouble"为时间状语从句，句中短语有"be in trouble 有困难"，"encourage sb to do sth 鼓励某人做某事"．这句话意为：当我有困难时，你总是鼓励我要有信心．
高分句型二：
You are not only my teacher but also my friend．
句中使用短语有"not only…but also…不但…而且…"．这句话意为：你不但是我的老师，还是我的朋友．

解答 Dear teacher，
I'm leaving school，but I will never forget your love．You are a tall and handsome man．You are kind to all of us．I can't forget the moment you talked to me，your smile，your sweet voice and your warm words．（老师留下的深刻印象）
After class，you often helped us with our study．When I was in trouble，you always encouraged me to have confidence．【高分句型一】You are not only my teacher but also my friend．【高分句型二】（回忆师生情）
I'll often write to you and come back to see you later on．I wish you a happy，healthy life．（表达祝福）
Your student

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