Question

3．I'm proud ofOne Thing I'm Proud of
I still remember how I became a good table tennis player．
The first day I went to high school，I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis．Amazed at how skillful they were，I was determined to be just as good．Later on，I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques．Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players．At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class．
I am really proud of this experience，because it helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work．It also helps me better understand the proverb"Practice makes perfect"．
Li Yue
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Answer 1

分析 重点短语：
1．At the end of the term 在学期末
2．through hard work通过努力
3．Practice makes perfect熟能生巧
高分句型：
【高分句型】1．The first day I went to high school，I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis．
我上中学的第一天，看见我的一些同学在打乒乓球．（see sb．doing sth．看见某人正在做某事）
【高分句型】2．Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players．
我坚持练习，直到很自信地挑战优秀选手．（keep doing坚持做某事）

解答 One Thing I'm Proud of
I still remember how I became a good table tennis player．
The first day I went to high school，I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis【高分句型】．Amazed at how skillful they were，I was determined to be just as good．Later on，I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques．Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players【高分句型】．At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class．
  I am really proud of this experience，because it helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work．It also helps me better understand the proverb"Practice makes perfect"．
Li Yue

点评 解答这种题目时，我们应该仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点． 要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写． 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯． 在平常的学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，让文章更出彩．