Question

【题目】书面表达

人的一生中要做出许多次选择。假设当初选择初中学校时，你和父母意见相左。请根据以下要点，用英语写一篇题为 “How I chose my school?” 的短文，描述这次选择的经过。词数100---120。文中不得出现真实人名和学校名。

要点如下：

1. 描述这件事情的来龙去脉	① 你选择A学校，理由是……； ② 你的父母选择B学校，理由是……； ③ 你是怎么说服父母的？（比如：上网查资料，向亲朋好友求助等等）
2. 你对此事的感想或体会	……

注意： 短文开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数。

Though it was a long time ago, I still remember how I chose my junior middle school.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Though it was a long time ago, I still remember how I chose my junior middle school. My parents and I held different views upon which school I should go to. I preferred to choose School A, thinking it offers students many after-school activities. My parents, however, would like to send me to School B, which enjoys great fame but takes 4 hours to go there by train.

I tried every possible means to persuade my parents. After finding out more persuasive information online, I asked my uncle to have a heart-to-heart talk with my parents. And I was lucky to win their approval in the end.

Looking back, I never regret it. Once you set your mind on it, you should stick to it and never give up.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者就怎样选择学校这一问题发表自己的观点，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如I preferred to choose School A, thinking it offers students many after-school activities. My parents, however, would like to send me to School B, which enjoys great fame but takes 4 hours to go there by train. 等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。