Question

【题目】书面表达

树木对我们很重要，离开了树木我们就无法生存。有了树木我们可以乘凉，我们可以从它们那里得到果实。它们的绿叶对我们也很有用。而有些人砍伐树木来制作纸张、木料，破坏了我们的生存环境。我们应该保护树木。

请你用诗歌的形式来说明树木的重要性。

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Answer 1

【答案】Trees

We need the trees for shelter，

We need the trees to feed us，

We need a place to stay，

We need them to survive.

Somewhere to raise our children，

They have the fruits and leaves.

Somewhere to hide away，

We need to stay alive.

You want the trees for paper，

You want the trees for timber，

You want the trees every day.

You want wood to build.

You use it just a little.

But logging is the reason.

And then throw it all away.

Many of the trees are killed.

【解析】试题本篇书面表达以诗歌的形式表达“树木的重要性”，结合所给的写作材料，阐述树木对人们生活带来的好处。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用和诗歌语言特点。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练, 时态运用准确。文中need sth. to do, and, but, hide away， stay alive，a little，throw it all away.等词(组)的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密, 语言流畅，要点齐全，内容丰富，这是一篇不错的范文。