Question

根据所提供的内容，写一篇描述灾害的文章。

3月16日凌晨两点钟，一场大火吞噬了福建省福州市某公寓。大火持续了两小时，烧毁了许多房子。还有两人在火中丧命。失火原因是一家饭店用火不当(the misuse of fire)。

假设你当时亲身经历火灾并幸运逃生，请展开合理想象，描述火灾前后及当时你的所见所闻和感受，词数在120词左右。

Answer 1

A big fire

A big fire hit a flat in Fuzhou，Fujian province at 2：00 a．m．on the early morning of March 16th．It was terrible．

I was in my bedroom，sleeping when suddenly I heard a lot of noise．I opened my door and smelt a heavy smoke coming up into my room very soon．I could see nothing but fire in my room!I felt scared and quite nervous—I was trapped in a fire! I screamed for help but suddenly fell to the ground and began to know nothing．When I came back to life，I found I was taken to the open air on the ground．Some firemen and my parents were beside me．They smiled and said I was lucky．I realized 1 was safe then．

I felt thankful but still a little frightened．And I was very sad when I heard that the big fire lasted for two hours and burned many houses．We lost our homes and two people even lost their lives in the fire．It started only because of the misuse of fire in a restaurant．

【解析】

试题解析：这是一篇材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般过去时进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如: nothing but除了…什么也没有；come back to life苏醒过来；because of由于等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,让文章更出彩。