题目内容
20.假定你是王林,你的英国笔友Helen在做有关世界各国中学生如何过周末的调查.她给你发了一封电子邮件,想了解相关情况.请认真阅读下面的邮件,根据邮件中的内容和你的实际情况用英语回复,可以适当发挥.注意:1.不少于60词,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数.
2.回复中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分.
| Subject:Weekends From:Helen |
| Dear Wang Lin, I'm doing a survey on how students spend their weekends around the world.I need your help.Could you please answer the following questions? ●How do you usually relax yourself on weekends? ●Do you do chores at home?Why or why not? ●What do you want to do most?And why? Thanks, Helen |
| Subject:Weekends From:Wang Lin |
| Dear Helen, Thank you for your email.I would like to answer your questions. InChina,westartourweekendfrom Saturday to Sunday.Itlastsabouttwodays.Wecandomanythingstorelaxourselveson weekends.Ioftengoswimming,surftheInternetandwatchTV. I usually do chores at home,because my parents are very busy and I want to help them. ButwhatIwanttodomostistravelingwithmyparents.Wehavebeentomanyplaces.Thisweekend,wearegoingtoBeijing.Wealwayshaveagoodtime Best wishes, Wang Lin |
分析 这是一篇图表作文.内容是给笔友回邮件说说你如何过周末的.注意邮件的格式.时态主要为一般现在时.人称主要为第一人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1.周末你怎样放松的?
2.在家做家务吗?理由
3.你最想做什么?理由
常用到的重点短语:
do chores 做家务
want to do sth 想要做某事
have been to 去过某地
have a good time 玩得开心
【高分句型】
1.We can do many things to relax ourselves in summer vacations.
动词不定式做目的状语.
2.I usually do chores at home,because my parents are very busy and I want to help them.
because引导的原因状语从句.
3.But what I want to do most is traveling with my parents.
what I want to do most 从句作为主语,谓语动词用单数is.
解答 Dear Helen,
Thank you for your email.I would like to answer your questions.
In China,we start our weekend from Saturday to Sunday.It lasts about two days.We can do many things to relax ourselves on weekends.【高分句型】I often go swimming,surf the Internet and watch TV.(周末你怎样放松的) I usually do chores at home,because my parents are very busy and I want to help them.【高分句型】(在家做家务吗?理由)
But what I want to do most is traveling with my parents.【高分句型】We have been to many places.This weekend,we are going to Beijing.We always have a good time.(你最想做什么?理由)
Best wishes,
Wang Lin
点评 这是一篇回复书信类的提纲作文.考生需要仔细阅读原邮件,提取作文的要点,根据邮件中所提问题,可从四方面展开作文.考生可直接用英语列出提纲,可以节约宝贵的时间,也可以提高答题的速度,然后再根据文章要点进一步的细化.且文章需注意书信体裁的格式,符合英语的表达习惯.
| Hi!Li Hua, I am very upset and I need your help.I didn't get on well with my best friend.I'm very worried because I have few friends.I don't want to lose her.What should I do?Do you have the same problem? I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Alice |
| Hi!Alice, I'm glad to hear from you.Yes,I sometimes have the same problem. If you don't want to lose your best friend,you should talk with her.Tell her what you think and your feelings.You can help each other and do the things together that you are interested in.You'd better learn how to get along well with your friends.I think communicating will make you become good friends again.A friend is a present which you give yourself. I hope what I said can help you. Yours, Li Hua |
| 要点提示 | 词汇参考 | |
| 益处 | 水的重要性 生活离不开水 | important,can't live |
| 存在 问题 | 浪费水严重 水污染严重 | less water,don't care of…,seriously polluted |
| 建议 | 节约用水 保护水资源 | save water,do something to… |
(1)语言表达正确;
(2)包括以上要点;
(3)可适当做些发挥.
---__________( )
| A. | All right. | B. | Oh,yes. | C. | Yes,I will. | D. | That's right. |
---______.( )
| A. | It's a pleasure. | B. | Thank you very much | ||
| C. | Thank you all the same. | D. | You are welcome. |
| A. | or | B. | and | C. | but | D. | so |
| Most boys | Most girls | Your opinion |
| Watch games in London Exciting and amazing Be close to the stars…. | Watch games on TV at home Choose programs freely Save time and money….. | …. |
These days people talk a lot about the 2012Olympic Games.Students in our class have different opinions about the ways to watch the games.Most boys would like to watch games in London.It is more exciting and amazing.What's more,they can get more chances to be close to the sports stars and take photos with them.
However,most girls prefer to watch games on TV at home.They would like to stay in a quiet place and enjoy choosing programs freely.They think they can also save a lot of time and money.
I'd like to go toLondon to watch games.It will be a wonderful experience for me!.