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11．成长中每个人都要面对烦恼，并解决问题．假设你叫李华，是美国中学生艾丽丝的朋友．你收到了她的电子邮件，请给她回复，回答她的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法．

Hi!Li Hua， I am very upset and I need your help．I didn't get on well with my best friend．I'm very worried because I have few friends．I don't want to lose her．What should I do？Do you have the same problem？ I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon． Yours， Alice

Hi!Alice， I'm glad to hear from you．Yes，I sometimes have the same problem． If you don't want to lose your best friend，you should talk with her．Tell her what you think and your feelings．You can help each other and do the things together that you are interested in．You'd better learn how to get along well with your friends．I think communicating will make you become good friends again．A friend is a present which you give yourself． I hope what I said can help you． Yours， Li Hua

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分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是给好友艾丽丝的回信，针对她说的不能和朋友好好相处的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法．注意信件的格式．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、二人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．艾丽丝与朋友相处不好，你有同样的情况吗？
2．提出建议；
常用到的重点短语：
talk with sb 与某人交谈
be interested in 对…感兴趣
had better do sth 最好做某事
get along with sb 与某人相处
【高分句型】
1．If you don't want to lose your best friend，you should talk with her．
if引导的条件状语从句，主句含有情态动词should，从句用一般现在时．
2．You can help each other and do the things together that you are interested in．
that作为关系词的定语从句，that作为从句的宾语，修饰先行词things
3．I think①②communicating will make you become good friends again．
①think后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句．
②动名词做主语．

解答 Hi!Alice，
   I'm glad to hear from you．
   Yes，I sometimes have the same problem．（我也有同样的情况）
   If you don't want to lose your best friend，you should talk with her．【高分句型】Tell her what you think and your feelings．You can help each other and do the things together that you are interested in．【高分句型】You'd better learn how to get along well with your friends．I think communicating will make you become good friends again．【高分句型】A friend is a present which you give yourself．（提出建议）
I hope what I said can help you．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封回信．本题材料主要是一封来信，故动笔前一定要认真阅读来信．在回信中对涉及的问题都要有所回应．根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要为一般现在时态．写作中注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误．注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯．