题目内容
【题目】假设你是李雷,昨天你参与了学校值日。请写一封信向校长汇报你值日时的所见所闻，并提出改进建议。要点如下：
值日见闻 | 1、校园不整洁，有学生乱扔垃圾，乱涂乱画，摘花，踩草坪； |
建 议 | 考生自拟至少两点。 |
要求：1、可以适当发挥，信中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2、语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3、词数：80词左右。书信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Headmaster,
I was on duty yesterday. ……
Sincerely,
Li Lei
【答案】Dear Headmaster,
I was on duty yesterday. Now I'm writing to tell you that the school was untidy. Some students threw rubbish everywhere. Some students drew on the wall. I also found that some girls walked on the grass and picked flowers. During break time many students ate too much junk food. Many boys spoke quite loudly and fought with each other. After school, some students forgot to turn off the lights when leaving the classroom. What's more, a few students even rode their bicycles on the playground. I think we should make rules to change the situation and care about the environment, then our school will become more beautiful.
Sincerely,
Li Lei
【解析】本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，写作的话题为“汇报值日时的所见所闻及建议”，在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤：
一、阅读提示，弄清所有信息，明确写作要点。
1.昨天我值日。我给你写信是告诉你校园不整洁。有学生乱扔垃圾。
2.有学生乱涂乱画。有学生摘花儿，踩草坪。
3.课间许多学生吃垃圾食品。
4.一些学生大声喧哗，互相打闹。
5.放学后有些学生忘记关灯。
6.我认为我们应该制定规定来改变这种情况，让学生关注环境，这样我们的校园会更美。
二、根据要点，写出关键词、短语或句子。
1be on duty；I'm writing to tell you that……；throw rubbish everywhere
2. draw on the wall； walk on the grass；pick flowers。
3. during break time；eat too much junk food
4.speak loudly；fight with each other。
5.forget to do sth；turn off
6. make rules to change the situation；care about the environment。
三、组词成句。连句成篇。注意使用一般过去时。
