Question

【题目】书面表达（共1题，15分）

随着人民生活水平的提升，手机成为生活中必不可少的一个重要沟通交流工具，也是被认为是世界上最有用的发明物之一。请以“Mobile phone”为题，写一篇80词左右的文章。

内容要点：1.手机发明前，人们之间常用的联系方式；

2.你认为手机的发明给人们生活带来的利弊；（各谈两点）

写作要求：短文须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

Mobile phone

With the improving of our living standard, the mobile phone has become an important communicative tool.

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Answer 1

【答案】

With the improving of our living standard, the mobile phone has become an important communicative tool. And it is seen as one of the most useful inventions of all time. We all know that many years ago, People in different places can only connect with each other by writing letters. It is the mobile phone that makes it easy to get information from all over the world. And we can also enjoy the music or films through the mobile phone. However, every coin has two sides. When we are enjoying the benefits that the mobile phone has brought us, we now face many problems. On the one hand, it’s bad for our eyes to use the mobile phone for a long time. On the other hand, some students spend much time playing games on the mobile phone.

In a word, whether you like it or not, the mobile phone indeed plays an important role in our life.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文多次使用连接词and、However，以及短语On the one hand，In a word等等为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。