Question

2．Write a passage of at least 60 words about the Topic"A lucky_______"
（以一个/件/…幸运的_____为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格子．）
注意：补全题目，记叙或描述你认为幸运的人/物/事…..，并阐述理由．
A lucky person
Speaking of a lucky person，I myself come into my mind．I have a happy family，which not only gives me plenty of love，but also teaches me how to love and to be thankful．Wherever I am and whatever I have experienced，my parents are the ones who always stand by my side．Besides，I have a lot of friends，who can share happiness and sorrow with me． When I feel depressed，they always give me comfort and encouragement．I am grateful for all that I have and feel that I am very lucky．In my opinion，everyone can be a lucky person if they have a sense of gratitude and the feeling of optimism．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I have a happy family，which not only gives me plenty of love，but also teaches me how to love and to be thankful．我有一个快乐的家庭，不仅仅给我很多爱也教会我怎样去爱和感恩．
which引导的非限制性定语从句．
not only…but also…不仅…而且…
【高分句型二】
 When I feel depressed，they always give me comfort and encouragement当我感到沮丧的时候，他们总是给我安慰和鼓励．
when引导的时间状语从句．

解答 A lucky person
Speaking of a lucky person，I myself come into my mind．（点题）I have a happy family，which not only gives me plenty of love，but also teaches me how to love and to be thankful．【高分句型一】Wherever I am and whatever I have experienced，my parents are the ones who always stand by my side．Besides，I have a lot of friends，who can share happiness and sorrow with me． When I feel depressed，they always give me comfort and encouragement【高分句型二】．I am grateful for all that I have and feel that I am very lucky．（原因）In my opinion，everyone can be a lucky person if they have a sense of gratitude and the feeling of optimism．（感受）

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