题目内容
【题目】书面表达（本大题共10分）
近几年，微信（ Wechat）变得时尚而受欢迎，给我们的生活带来了很大的影响。请根据
以下要点，写一篇以微信（ Wechat）为题的短文，阐述你对微信的看法。内容要点如下：
1． 过去我们常常写信，发邮件与他人交流，而现在越来越多的人使用微信；
2． 微信可以发语音，文本信息和图片，视频（video）；
3． 微信使大家交友更容易，还能快速分享自己的经历；
4． 但是，也带来一些困扰，视频聊天，不利于学习，微信交友，并不安全……..
5． 你对使用微信的态度。
注意：词数在90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数，第四，五可作适当发挥。
In recent years, Wechat is becoming fashionable and popular. It has made a difference to our daily life.
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【答案】
In recent years, WeChat is becoming fashionable and popular. It has made a difference to our daily life. We used to get in touch with each other by letters and emails, but now more and more people are using WeChat. We can send voice and text messages through WeChat as well as pictures and videos easily. By using it, making friends is becoming easier. And we can share our life experiences faster. However, there are also some problems. Using WeChat too often is not good for students’ study. And it is not safe for students to make friends by WeChat . I think WeChat is helpful to us, but we should always be careful.
【解析】
试题分析： 这篇作文围绕微信来写作，题目中具体列出了写作要点，将其归类可包括微信的优点，缺点，以及自己对微信的态度。作文课采用第一人称，用一般现在时。写作时避免将要点逐句翻译，可将一要点进行整合，并且相关句子之间可使用一个连接词来增加文章的逻辑性。
写作亮点：这篇作文要点齐全，结构完整清楚，表述准确流畅。文中使用了很多短语如，used to过去常做，get in touch保持联系，as well as和，be good for对……有益，等等。另外，文章使用了一些连接词，使文章更加流畅，如but但是， and并且，however然而。句子Using WeChat too often is not good for students’ study.动名词形式做主语。
