Question

【题目】 书面表达（本大题共10分）

“五·一”即将来临，你打算用以往攒下的零花钱(pocket money)给父母买一件礼物。

请以“A present for my parents”为题写一篇文章。该文章必须包括一下内容：

1. 你送的礼物：一张健康俱乐部的贵宾卡；

2. 你父母的现状：父亲是教师，工作很辛苦；母亲喜欢读书，但缺乏运动；

3. 你送礼物的原因；

4. 该礼物对他们可能产生的影响和带来的变化。

注意：

1. 文章应包括以上所有信息，要有适当的发挥。

2. 词数：100左右。文章的开头已经写好，不记入总词数。

3. 参考词汇：

health club 健康俱乐部；a VIP card 一张贵宾卡

A present for my parents

May Day is coming and I want to give my parents a present. ……

Answer 1

【答案】

A present for my parents

May Day is coming and I want to give my parents a present. That is a VIP card of a health club. My father works hard as a teacher, spending most of his time at school. My mother and I sometimes accompany him in his office till a late hour. So I know that my father works with great effort. My mother loves reading and often dives into piles of books. But she seldom does exercise.

I want to give them this present to express my love and thanks to them. As I grow up, they are getting older. Both of them should exercise more but neither is doing enough. With the health club membership, I hope that they will find time to do more exercise.

I think that they will relax in the health club and make more friends. At the same time, I hope with more exercise, they will enjoy better health. What’s more, they could spend more time with each other together.

【解析】

试题分析：围绕“五·一”即将来临，作者用以往攒下的零花钱给父母买一件礼物，阐述礼物对他们可能产生的影响和带来的变化。考生在写作时要注意论点清晰及条理清楚。题目已给定大致的观点，要注意汉译英的正确性以及不要遗漏观点，特别注意不要逐条翻译。

写作亮点：本篇文章句式的灵活多变。本文开篇第二句， My father works hard as a teacher, spending most of his time at school.本句用了一个较为高级的伴随状语，省略了主语；文章第二段第一句As I grow up, they are getting older.As引导的时间状语从句；文章第二段倒数第一句With the health club membership, I hope that they will find time to do more exercise。With 的复合结构。还有诸多精彩的句子就不一一列举里，这些都显示了较好的英语功底。

本文主要从为什么送礼物，希望礼物能为他们带来什么样的改变来写。然后用简单的语言表达出来，既符合题目要求，又完整的概括了所有的观点，是一篇较好的概要写作。