Question

15．昨天（周六），你和你的朋友去离家不远的"人民公园"进行了一次野餐．根据提示次写一篇词数在60-80之间的作文．要求表达准确，语意完整．（提示词要全部用上）
提示词：far，early，bike，sing，dance，lunch，football，late，tired，happy，exciting．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
After we arrived there，we took photos，flew kites and told jokes我们到达那里之后，我们照相，放风筝和讲笑话．
after引导的时间状语从句．
【高分句型二】
And we are all looking forward to our next picnic我们都期待下一次的野餐．
look forward to sth期待某事．

解答 My name is Li Lei．I went to People's Park for a picnic with my classmates yesterday．（交待时间地点人物）We met at the school gate．We took lots of food and drinks with us，such as sandwiches，vegetables，fruit and some juice．（食物饮料）It is very far from our school，so we left school early．After we arrived there，we took photos，flew kites and told jokes【高分句型一】．We also had a hapy meal while enjoying the beautiful views of People's Park．After lunch，boys played football and girls sang and danced．（活动）It was really an exciting experience．We all had a good time that day．Although we were tired，we were happy．And we are all looking forward to our next picnic【高分句型二】．（感受）

点评 能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．