Question

3．以My Perfect Neighbourhood 为题，写一篇80字左右的短文．
要求：书写规范，卷面整洁．
My Perfect Neighbourhood
I'm living in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood，and I have been living here for years．It's on the north of my school．There are about 100 families．I live on the eighth floor of a high bilding with my parents．There are many trees and flowers near the neighborhood，The air is fresh，people can live more healthily．I always take a walk in it．It's not far from the center of the city，The bus ride only takes half an hour．There is a zoo near here，and many tourists come here to have a visit．The best thing is my neighbors are very friendly and they help each other．Some always share their abilities on weekends．I love my neighborhood very much．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
There is a zoo near here，and many tourists come here to have a visit附近有一个动物园，很多游客来这游玩．
动词不定式做目的状语．
【高分句型二】
The best thing is my neighbors are very friendly and they help each other最好的事情是我的邻居们都很友好彼此帮助，
省略了that的表语从句，与is构成系表结构．

解答 My Perfect Neighbourhood
I'm living in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood，and I have been living here for years．It's on the north of my school．There are about 100 families．（小区位置和规模）I live on the eighth floor of a high bilding with my parents．There are many trees and flowers near the neighborhood，The air is fresh，people can live more healthily．（空气环境）I always take a walk in it．It's not far from the center of the city，The bus ride only takes half an hour．There is a zoo near here，and many tourists come here to have a visit．（交通）【高分句型一】The best thing is my neighbors are very friendly and they help each other．【高分句型二】Some always share their abilities on weekends．（邻里相处）I love my neighborhood very much．（感受）

点评 能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．