Question

4．随着"爸爸去哪儿？"等综艺节目的播出，人们越来越意识到爸爸对孩子成长的重要作用．根据近期你校对本校学生的调查，统计出孩子心目中好爸爸的三大优秀品质．请你根据下列表格中的内容，以"What makes a good father？"为题，用英文写一篇短文．

好爸爸的品质	百分比	理    由
1．多花时间陪孩子	52%	感受到父爱．
2．以身作则	27%	为孩子树立表率，教会他们诚实、勇敢．
3．经常赞美孩子	14%	给孩子的一个微笑也是对孩子的赞赏．
请给出2条你认为好爸爸应具有的其他品质，并加以说明．

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What makes a good father？
With the hot Chinese reality show"Where Are We Going，Dad？"broadcast，people realize that fathers play an important role in the growth of their children．From the recent survey of our students，we have found that there are three most important qualities that a good father should have．
52% of the students think a good father should spend more time with his children．In this way they'll feel their father'slove.27% of the students believe a good father is a good example．He can teach his children to be honest and braver.14% of the students thinka good father should often praise his childrenbecause hissmiles also suggesthispraise．
In my opinion，a good father is also a patient teacher．A good father will listen to his children and give them suggestions if necessary．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
14% of the students think a good father should often praise his children because his smiles also show his praise．
句中"a good father should often praise his children"为宾语从句，"because his smiles also show his praise"为原因状语从句．这句话意为：14%的学生认为一个好爸爸应该经常表扬他的孩子，因为他的微笑也是一种赞赏．
高分句型二：
In my opinion，a good father is not only a patient teacher but also a good friend．
句中使用短语有"in one's opinion 依某人的观点"、"not only…but also…不仅…而且…"．这句话意为：依我看来，好爸爸不仅是一位耐心的老师还应该是一个好朋友．

解答 What makes a good father？
With the hot Chinese reality show"Where Are We Going，Dad？"broadcast，people realize that fathers play an important role in the growth of their children．From the recent survey of our students，we have found that there are three most important qualities that a good father should have．（开篇点题）
52% of the students think a good father should spend more time with his children．In this way they'll feel their father's love.27% of the students believe a good father is a good example．He can teach his children to be honest and brave.14% of the students think a good father should often praise his children because his smiles also show his praise．【高分句型一】（调查结果）
In my opinion，a good father is not only a patient teacher but also a good friend．【高分句型二】He will listen to his children and give them suggestions if it is necessary．（我的观点）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．