Question

19．城市文明，你我有责．假如你是阳光中学的李明，写一份倡议书．请根据表格内容，描述不文明行为，并倡议同学们在校内外讲文明、守秩序（obey public rules），共创良好公共环境．

不文明行为	spit（吐痰）here and there play with public facilities（设备）
文明 行为	校内	●教学楼：上下楼梯靠右行，不追逐打闹 ●餐厅：排队等候，安静就餐 ●教室：不在课桌上乱画
		校外●马路上：…．． ●公园里：…

要求：1．所写内容必须包括表格中的信息，可适当发挥．
2．自拟至少两点对校外文明的倡议．
3．文章不少于80词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
4．语句通顺，字迹工整；
My dear friends，
Each of us has the duty to obey public rules．Let's say no to the bad behavior（行为）．
                                           
Finally，I'd like to say，the more efforts we make，the better public places we will have．
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
While we are enjoying ourselves in the park，remember not to pick flowers or leave our waste things there．
句中"While we are enjoying ourselves in the park"为时间状语从句，句中短语有：enjoy oneself 过得愉快；remember to do sth 记得去做某事．这句话意为：当你在公园玩耍时，记得不要摘花或者在那儿留下垃圾．
高分句型二：
In short，the more efforts we make，the better public places we will have．
这句话使用了比较级的特殊用法"the more…the more…越…越…"．"in short"意为"总而言之"．这句话意为：总而言之，我们越努力，我们的公共环境会越好．

解答 My dear friends，
Each of us has the duty to obey public rules．Let's say no to the bad behavior．（开篇点题）
Now，we can still see some people spit here and there．Sometimes，naughty children play with public facilities．Besides，a few people say bad words at each other．（不文明行为）I think each of us should do good things．At school，we should walk on the right-hand side of the stairs．Don't play on the stairs．In the dining hall，remember to stand in a line and wait for your turn．Be quiet when you eat．In the classroom，we must keep the desk clean．Don't draw on the desk．（校内文明行为）
We need to obey public rules outside the school as well．When you cross the road，please wait for the green light．While we are enjoying ourselves in the park，remember not to pick flowers or leave our waste things there．【高分句型一】（校外文明行为）
In short，the more efforts we make，the better public places we will have．【高分句型二】（升华主题）
Li Ming

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．