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【题目】根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。
为了使生活更美好，社会需要正能量（positive energy）。生活中，我们需要他人的帮助，也要学会帮助他人。请你在网上给"What Would You Do？"本期节目留言。内容包括：1. 你对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法；2. 说说你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例；3. 呼吁大家互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充满正能量。
作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。
In the program, a customer stood up when the blind woman was cheated in the cake shop.……

Answer 1

【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when the blind woman was cheated in the cake shop. I am for her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need. (看法)
The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost. I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until her dad arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand. （事例）
In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others' help. In this way our society will fill with positive energy. As the saying goes, "The roses in her hand, the flavor in mine."
【解析】本题属于题干类作文，主要应该叙述如何在社会上帮助别人，在写作时应注意符合题意，根据要表达的内容确定所用时态，语言表达要符合英语中的习惯。
一、阅读提示，弄清题目信息，明确写作要点。
1.你对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法
2.说说你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例
3.呼吁大家互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充满正能量
二、根据要点，写出关键词，短语或句子。
三、组词成句，连词成篇。注意使用一般过去时。