题目内容
【题目】书面表达(本大题15分)
假设你是李阳,你北京的笔友方舟听说你现在与过去比有很大变化,他写信询问你。请根据以下信息,写一封回信。
1、五年不见,自己的变化很大(身高、体型、性格等);
2、过去不喜欢英语,现在的对英语很感兴趣,而且考试中取得好的成绩;
3、问方舟能否告诉你如何与同学相处得融洽;
4、很想去北京玩,想知道哪里有吃北京烤鸭(Beijing Duck)的好地方;
5、邀请李阳到你家玩,简单介绍乘车路线。
关键词:used to, become interested in , get on well with ;
要求:字数80字左右。
Dear Fang Zhou,
I am looking forward to seeing you again!
Yours
Li Yang
【答案】
Dear Fang Zhou,
How are you doing?I haven’t seen you for five years.Have you changed a lot?I am taller and stronger than before.I didn’t use to like English,but now I become interested in it.So I have got good grades in the exams.I used to be quiet,now I’m more outgoing.But I don’t know how to get on well with classmates.Could you tell me what I should do.I want to go to Beijing.I want to know which is the place to eat Beijing Duck.Do you want to come to my home?Now let me tell you the way to my home.You can take NO.301 bus to Xinji Station.Then take NO.205 bus to Renmin Hospital.My home is near the hospital.I will wait for you at the hospital.
I am looking forward to seeing you again!
Yours
Li Yang
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇材料作文。所给材料内容比较详细,条理清楚,我们要做的就是用英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题,深入挖掘题材内涵,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题,同时注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点: 这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容,表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上多用简单句,文章脉络清晰,自然流畅。同时,文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语,如:use to do、be interested in、get on well with等,以及比较级的使用,这为文章增色不少。