Question

【题目】（题文）在你的成长历程中，一定收到过礼物。有件礼物不一定贵重，但是在你看来却非常珍贵。

某英语杂志以“A Precious Present(一件珍贵的礼物)”为题举办征文活动，请写一篇短文，跟大家分享。内容包括：

1.这件礼物是什么？

2.你为什么觉得它珍贵？

3.它背后有什么故事？

要求： 1.100词左右； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。

Answer 1

【答案】A precious present

The title “A Precious Present” reminds me of quite a few gifts I’ve got. Yet, the first come to my mind is the book, the Adventures of Tom Sawyer.

On my tenth birthday, my father gave it to me as a gift. Because I didn’t like reading, I put it on the bookshelf. One boring day, I picked it up and looked through it. Unexpectedly, the story interested me greatly. I found pleasure in reading books. From then on, I became fascinated in reading.

Though the book is not valuable, it’s precious. I’ll regard it as a treasure forever.

【解析】

这是一篇命题作文，以“A Precious Present”为题与大家分享一件自己所拥有的珍礼物。人称为第一人称，时态以一般过去时为主。写作时要注意作文的整体框架。首先介绍这件礼物的名字是什么，附带着说明它的来历，接着讲述这件礼物背后的故事，最后可以总结说明为什么这件礼物对你来说非常珍贵。另外，写作时还需注意语句间的衔接，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。