Question

【题目】假如李明是你的好朋友，根据提示写一篇80词左右的短文介绍李明的业余爱好。（短文开头已给出）

提示语：

1. 李明以前是个电影迷，一周至少去看两次电影，有时租VCD在家里看，最喜欢的影星是姜文；

2. 李明现在的兴趣是集邮，认为集邮非常有趣，可以从邮票上学到很多关于人物、地点、历史的知识，有些旧邮票非常有价值；

3. 上周五是李明的生日，他从朋友那里得到了许多邮票，非常高兴。

Li Ming is my good friend. He has many hobbies. He used to

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Answer 1

【答案】

Li Ming is my good friend. He has many hobbies. He used to be a movie fan. He went to the movie theater at least twice a week. Sometimes he rented VCDs and watched them at home. His favorite movie star was Jiang Wen.

Now Lin Ming is interested in collecting stamps. He thinks it's great fun. He can learn a lot about people, places, history and many other things from stamps. Some old stamps are very valuable.

Last Friday was Li Ming's birthday. He got many stamps from his friends. Li Ming was very happy.

【解析】

考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
本篇作文明显分成三段，而且三段时态有区别。第一段讲述李明以前的爱好，故用一般过去时，在第一段中使用了used to do表示过去常常做某事，而现在不做。第二段描述李明现在的爱好，用一般现在时。第三段描述上周五李明过生日的情况，用一般过去时。