Question

【题目】书面表达

学校将在下周举行英文演讲比赛，Jack的话题是“对我影响最深的人”，请根据以下材料，帮他组织一篇英文演讲稿，介绍一下三位对他影响最深的人。

Persons	Jobs	Details
My father	A cook	1. 40多岁, 中等身材; 2. 充满爱心(具体表现); 3. 令我惊讶的是, 他已经决定去世后捐赠遗体供医学研究.
Tan Dun	A composer	1. 1958年出生在湖南省中部地区, 从小对音乐很感兴趣; 2. 把中西方音乐融合在一起; 3. ….. (发挥一点)
Jackie Chan	A film star	1. 成龙, 已参演了近100部影片, 获得了许多奖项; 2. 多年从事慈善工作(具体表现); 3. 被公认为是一位超级明星, 受到人们高度赞扬.

The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. My topic is “the persons who have influenced me most”. They are my father, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.

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They are all my heroes. From now on, I will learn from them.

Answer 1

【答案】

The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. My topic is “the persons who have influenced me most”. They are my father, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.

My father is a good cook. He is over forty years old. He is neither tall nor short. He is a person full of love. He often helps those people in need. To my surprise, he has already decided to devote his body for medical research after his death.

Tan Dun is a great composer. He was born in Central Hunan in 1958. He showed an interest in music when he was very young. He has brought Chinese and Western music together and has helped build a bridge between the East and the West.

Jackie Chan is a famous film star. He has acted in nearly 100 films and has won many awards. He has spent many years doing charity work. He has helped lots of people. He is considered as a superstar and is highly thought of by people.

They are all my heroes. From now on, I will learn from them.

【解析】

试题分析：1，仔细审题。注意题目的具体要求，明确写作要求，确立文章要用的时态。本文应以一般现在时为主。2，注意写作要点，理出写作框架。本篇书面表达的要点已经给出，应注意将提示的内容写完全，不要遗漏。3，连句成篇，注意语言的连贯和过渡。在写作中适当使用连词，会使文章过渡自然。最后还需检查单词拼写、标点符号、大小写等细节问题。

写作亮点：文中使用了一些连接词如so…that等等，也使用了一些复合句和并列句，这些都为文章增色不少。