Question

【题目】根据图示，将它们编写成一个有趣的故事，并将您的推测写进故事中，限定为100字左右。关键字：land, man, UFO, alien, chase, must,could/might,can’t

My neigbour, John lives alone. He had…

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Answer 1

【答案】One possible version:

My neighbor, John lives alone. He had an unbelievable experience. Three days ago, a huge plate suddenly landed in front of his house. There might be someone visiting him. Then a short alien got out of the strange UFO and knocked at John’s window. He was too scared to move away. After a minute the door opened little by little. He saw an ugly alien walking up to him. It can’t be a human being. “Help! Help!” John cried loudly, running out of his house. Many neighbors were woken up by the scary noises. The alien noticed him at once. It was chasing after the poor man. At the moment, it thundered and lightened in the sky. Everything disappeared when John turned back. There could be something strange around us. Do you believe it or not?

【解析】

根据题目要求，可知本文属于图画作文，首先需要理清几幅图画之间的脉络关系，找出有趣所在，主旨主题所在；文章主要讲述了作者一个邻居突遇飞碟和外星人的有趣故事。然后确定文章所使用的时态，语态，人称；文章使用一般过去时态，第三人称为主。接下来需要确定文章的脉络，列出写作要点，以及每个要点可能要用到的表达。然后围绕要点着手进行写作，在写作时注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。写作完成后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。