Question

【题目】假如你是李梅，刚刚搬到了新家，十分开心，想与你的美国好友Jenny一起分享这份快乐。请根据以下信息，给好友写一封电子邮件，向她介绍你的房间。

写作要点：

介绍房间里的家具（床、桌子、椅子、书架）。

飞机模型和书在书柜里。

足球在椅子下面。

英语书和字典在床上的书包里。

写作要求：

不得使用真实姓名和学校名。

可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。

至少50词。

Answer 1

【答案】I have a small but comfortable and tidy bedroom.

There are a single bed, a desk, a chair and a bookshelf in my bedroom. The bookshelf is near the window. I put all the books I love best and some model planes on it. There is a football under a chair.My English book and a dictionary are in my schoolbag.

On the west wall there hangs a violin. It is my favorite.I usually play violin to enjoy myself at my spare time.

【解析】【亮点说明】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如in my bedroom，near the window，under a chair，in my schoolbag，enjoy myself等。而There are a single bed, a desk, a chair and a bookshelf in my bedroom./ There is a football under a chair.句式的运用更是为文章增色不少。