Question

【题目】书面表达

你的新朋友们想了解你的家乡，请根据下面提示，以"My hometown"为题，写一篇70词左右的短文来介绍你的家乡。要求包含所有要点，适当发挥，语句通顺，书写整洁。要点如下:

1.我的家乡安静而又现代化;

2.这里空气清新，有湖泊和河流;

3.这里有很多事情可以做，例如……;

4.我认为我的家乡很宜居，我爱我的家乡。

Answer 1

【答案】My hometown

I’d like to tell you something about my hometown. It is a small town near the city, and it is new , quiet and modern. It looks very beautiful with many trees and flowers in it. And the air here is clean and fresh. There is a lake in the town and also a river around the town. People can row a boat on the lake or the river. There are some large shopping malls in the centre of the town and people can buy anything they need. I think my hometown is a nice place to live. I love my hometown very much.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，以"My hometown"为题，写一篇短文来介绍我的家乡。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I’d like to tell you……，It is……，And the air here is……，There is……，I think……，I love……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。