Question

【题目】书面表达

健康的生活习惯是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应该是怎样的呢？请根据以下的信息提示，写一篇短文。

内容：1、健康饮食；

2、早睡早起，不熬夜；

3、参加运动，强身健体。

要求：

1、必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2、80词左右；

3、文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。

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Answer 1

【答案】Healthy habit

I think healthy habits are important for us. As we all know, healthy life habits will bring us good health. How can we develop healthy habit?

First of all, we must keep a balanced diet. Eating too much or too little, or choosing wrong food may cause many illness. Moreover, we should take exercise every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. Doing sports for an hour every day is also a way to keep us strong. Last but not least, we’d better go to bed early and get up early. The body needs enough sleep to work well. Children at our age should have at least eight hours’ sleep every night.

As long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health.

【解析】

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