Question

13．老人跌倒该不该扶，敢不敢扶，一度成为社会热点．针对这一话题，人们做了一个调查．下面是调查结果，请你据此写一篇文章．
内容要点：
1．调查结果是什么？
该帮
2．你认为是否该去帮助跌倒老人，请说明原因． 如果该帮助，那你会怎么帮？
不该帮
3．号召大家对需要帮助的人施以援手．
要求：
1．不能出现真实姓名和校名．
2．字数80字左右，文章开头已给出．
We did a survey about whether we should help the old when they fall down，and here are the results．Only a small percentage of people think they will help the old，while 42% of people refuse to help the old，also there are some people who say it's not easy to say．In my opinion，we should help the old people，because we all have parents，and we will grow old one day．If all of us are not willing to give our hands，how can we ask others to help ourselves？
So I strongly call on people to show your love to the old，not only for others but also for ourselves．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是根据调查结果说说老人跌倒扶不扶这个热点．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．调查结果：42%认为不该帮，19%该帮，38%不好说
2．你的看法和原因；
 3．号召大家对需要帮助的人施以援手．
常用到的重点短语：
fall down 跌倒
refuse to do sth 拒绝做某事
be willing to do sth 乐意做某事
ask sb to do sth 让某人做某事
call on 号召
not only…but also…不仅…而且…
【高分句型】
1．Only a small percentage of people think①they will help the old，②while 42% of people ③refuse to help the old，also ④there are some people ⑤who say⑥it's not easy to say．
①think后是省略了that的宾语从句．
②while表示然而，连词，前后表对比
③refuse to do sth 拒绝做某事
④there be 有
⑤who作为关系词的定语从句，who作为从句的主语，修饰先行词people．
⑥say后是省略了that的宾语从句．it作为形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语，构成it's+adj+to do sth 做某事是怎样的．
2．①If all of us ②are not willing to give our hands，how can we ③ask others to help ourselves？
①if引导的条件状语从句．
②be willing to do sth 乐意做某事
③ask sb to do sth 让某人做某事
3．So I strongly ①call on people to show your love to the old，②not only for others but also for ourselves．
①call on 号召
②not only…but also…不仅…而且…连接前后两个并列的短语

解答 We did a survey about whether we should help the old when they fall down，and here are the results．Only a small percentage of people think they will help the old，while 42% of people refuse to help the old，also there are some people who say it's not easy to say．【高分句型】（调查结果）In my opinion，we should help the old people，because we all have parents，and we will grow old one day．If all of us are not willing to give our hands，how can we ask others to help ourselves？【高分句型】（我认为该帮及原因）
So I strongly call on people to show your love to the old，not only for others but also for ourselves．【高分句型】（号召大家对需要帮助的人施以援手）

点评 这篇作文是以话题老人跌倒该不该扶，敢不敢扶为主题，题目以图画提供数据，通过细心观察图中的数字，表示不同人的观点，写作时要合理使用信息，弄清写作的意图，通过分析思考把握逻辑联系，找出主题并借助所给的文字，把图中的信息转化成文章．在表述自己的观点时，要合理并写出理由，最后要给出建议．
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少．如：Only a small percentage of people think they will help the old，while 42% of people refuse to help the old，also there are some people who say it's not easy to say．使用到了连词while以及定语从句． If all of us are not willing to give our hands，how can we ask others to help ourselves？条件状语从句．In my opinion，call on，not only for others but also for ourselves．等等．学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．