Question

18．临近毕业之际．你们班要准备一场毕业生晚会（Prom Night）．假设你将在晚会上发言，请结合以下提示，以"My Speech for Prom Night"为题写一篇发言稿．

要求：（1）语言通颀，耍点齐全，意思连贫．条理洧楚，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校的名称：
（3）词数：80〜100同．
My Speech for Prom Night
Dear teachers and classmates，
Good evening!I'm very proud to share something with you all．
First，I'd like to thank all our teachers．We have learned a lot from you．You've developed our interests，skills and made us grow up happily．
Next，I should thank my classmates．We've studied together，helped each other and had a lot of fun．Soon we will go to new schools and may not see each other so often in the future．But I believe our friendship will never change．
Wish you all success and good luck in the future．
That's all．Thank you!．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是以"My Speech for Prom Night"为题根据图示写一篇发言稿，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．发言时的感受
2．你想要感谢谁？
3．为什么要感谢他们？
4．祝愿
 
常用到的重点短语：
be proud to do sth 做某事很骄傲
share sth with sb 与某人分享某物
make sb do sth 让某人做某事

【高分句型】
1．①I'm very proud to ②share something with you all．
①be proud to do sth 做某事很骄傲
②share sth with sb 与某人分享某物
2．But I believe our friendship will never change．
believe后是省略that的宾语从句．
3．Wish you all success and good luck in the future．
wish sb sth祝愿某人怎样

解答 My Speech for Prom Night
Dear teachers and classmates，
Good evening!I'm very proud to share something with you all．【高分句型】（发言感到自豪）
First，I'd like to thank all our teachers．We have learned a lot from you．You've developed our interests，skills and made us grow up happily．
Next，I should thank my classmates．We've studied together，helped each other and had a lot of fun．Soon we will go to new schools and may not see each other so often in the future．But I believe our friendship will never change．【高分句型】（感谢老师同学们以及原因）
Wish you all success and good luck in the future．【高分句型】（祝愿）
That's all．Thank you!

点评 这是一篇看图作文．看图作文要注意一下几点（1）弄清图画内容，把握情节线索，根据图画在脑海中串联出完整的故事，注意图画中的细节．（2）结合提示词，明确考查意图．所给提示词可帮助理解画面内容，也是组成句子的必用材料．有时还会给出起始句（这就给出了时态），学生运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型，作适当展开，联想，就能比较完整地表达出画面的意思了．（3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯．（4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用．（5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等．