Question

10．优美的城市需要优秀的市民 （citizen），你的行为影响着城市的形象．请你参考下面调查表中的内容，根据要点提示和写作要求，写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何做一个好市民．

Good Behavior In Public		Always	Sometimes	Never
				A	B	C
①	wait for your turn in line
②	be polite to others
③	give your seat to the old
④	care for the environment
⑤	follow rules and obey signs
⑥	volunteer your time to help others
Mostly A：You're the perfect citizen!Keep it up!
Mostly B：Not bad，but think how you can become a better citizen．
Mostly C：Oh no!You need to think about other people more!

要点提示：①why it's important to be a good citizen
②ways to be a good citizen
写作要求：①调查表仅供参考，不必填写；
②短文无须写标题；
③词数不得少于80；
④文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
we should volunteer to help people in trouble我们应该志愿去帮助处于困难的人．
介词短语做为后置定语，修饰people．
【高分句型二】
If you can try your best，and think about other people more，you will be a better citizen．如果你能尽力，更多的考虑他人，你就会是一个更好的市民．
if引导的条件状语从句．

解答 We won't have a great city without great citizens．Is your city better or worse because of your behavior？（为什么）As a student，what should we do to be good citizens？
Firstly，we should follow rules and obey signs in public，such as waiting in line and no littering around．Secondly，we are supposed to be polite to others，for example，give our seats to the old．Thirdly，we should volunteer to help people in trouble．【高分句型一】
There are many ways to be a good citizen．If you can try your best，and think about other people more，you will be a better citizen．【高分句型二】（方式）

点评 写作要抓住要点．要在"准"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子要进行默写，这样在写作时就能写出准确地道的作文．