请以 A trip to Beijing 为题写一篇短文.不少于80字．要点如下:去年寒假期间.你和你的父母去北京度假了．你们花了两个半小时乘飞机到那儿．Main pointsDetailsWhen去年寒假Where北京Who我和我的父母What参观名胜游览了许多名胜.北海公园---划船.长城(the Great Wall---登上了长城的顶� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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11．请以"A trip to Beijing"为题写一篇短文，不少于80字．要点如下：
去年寒假期间，你和你的父母去北京度假了．你们花了两个半小时乘飞机到那儿．

	Main points	Details
When	去年寒假
Where	北京
Who	我和我的父母
What	参观名胜	游览了许多名胜，北海公园（Beihai Park）---划船，长城（the Great Wall---登上了长城的顶部，感到非常开心，颐和园（the Summer Palace）---欣赏美丽的风景，忍不住拍了很多照片，故宫博物院（the Palace Museum）---更多的了解了中国的历史．
	其他活动	在王府井（Wangfujing Street）购物，给亲戚朋友买了许多礼物，希望他们都喜欢．
	餐饮	美味的当地小吃
How	享受旅行	-----（不少于2句话）

分析高分句型一
It took us two and a half hours to fly there．我们花了两个半小时才飞到那儿．It takes/took sb．…to do sth．某人花费…时间做某事．
高分句型二
I hope I can visit it again some day．我希望有一天我能再次参观这里．这是一个宾语从句，I hope是主句，后面的是宾语从句．

解答 A trip to Beijing
My family and I went to Beijing by plane last winter holiday【开篇点明主题】．It took us two and a half hours to fly there【高分句型一，注意固定句型的使用】．We visited many places of interest．We went boating in Beihai Park，we arrived at the top of the the Great Wall，we felt very happy．We also went to the Summer Palace and took many photos．We went to the Imperial Palace museum to learn more about the history of China．We enjoyed places of natural beauty and ate lots of delicious food．My mother bought a lot of presents for our relatives on Wangfujing Street．We enjoyed ourselves，I hope I can visit it again some day【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】．【正文部分详细介绍旅游情况】

点评本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．