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3．每个人的成长中多是一种蜕变的过程，从幼稚走向成熟从逆境走向成功，请你根据下面图示及内容提示，用于英语写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈你在成长中所经历的最大的一次转变．
参考词汇：transformation 蜕变   naughty 调皮的
提    示：1 短文应包括图表中的全部信息，调理清楚，行文连贯．
2 词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Each person's growth is a process of transformation．From young to mature，from failure to success，
                                                                  

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．主要写其变化前后的样子、促成其转变的主要原因和其为此变化付出的努力．写过去用一般过去时，转变后的现在用一般现在时．
高分句型：
①I only like playing computer games at home．我只喜欢在家玩电脑游戏．句子中like doing sth表示喜欢做某事，后面跟的是动词的ing形式．
②She asked me to play outside with others．她叫我和别人一起出去玩．句子中ask sb to do sth表示让某人做某事，后面跟to引导的不定式短语．

解答 Each person's growth is a process of transformation．From young to mature，from failure to success，So  is mine．（引出话题）
At first，I was shy and I used to stay in the classroom instead of playing with classmates after class．I only like playing computer games at home（高分句型）．Because I hated English，my English mark is very low in the exam．（变化前的情况）Later，a girl came to my class，and she changed my life．She became my best friend．She asked me to play outside with others（高分句型）．She helped me with my English by encouraging me to read English aloud，to talk to her in English．I also practice English after school．Gradually，My English score was higher and higher（变化后的情况）．Now，I am a confident and outgoing girl．I have changed so much that many people like to make friends with me．（感受）

点评 文中使用了非常好的短词为文章增色不少，首先是from…to…，a kind of，used to，instead of，help with．等固定词组，其次还运用了at first，later，gradually，now等使层次更清晰．文章整体内容饱满，条理清晰，表达流畅．