Question

【题目】书面表达

环境污染是当今世界上最令人头痛的问题，你知道污染有哪些，对我们的环境有怎么样的影响？作为学生的我们，该如何去做才能保护到我们周围的环境？请以“Saving the Earth”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。

Saving the Earth

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Answer 1

【答案】Saving the Earth

As time gone by, man is making the earth sick. The environmental problem may be the most serious problem in the world today. The water is polluted. The air is polluted; The soil is polluted. Many trees were cut down. As a result, people have no clean water to drink, many wild animals disappeared; Many people died of diseases. It’s time for human to protect our environment now. How to protect our environment? Here are my opinions:

First, as a student, we shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. We shouldn’t use plastic bags; we shouldn’t step on grass; we shouldn’t pick flowers and young trees. We should pick up litter; we should put the litter into dustbin; we should recycle, reduce, reused things.Second, the factories mustn’t pour waste water into rivers directly and they mustn’t let out heavy smoke into sky. In these ways, we can protect our environment.

【解析】

这是一篇话题作文，以“Saving the Earth”为题，写一篇短文介绍我们学生该如何去做才能保护到我们周围的环境。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：The water is……，It’s time for human to……，We shouldn’t……，等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。