Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是我们学校一个叫约翰的学生,上周我们学校举行了风筝节（Kite Festival）,请用英语写一封电子邮件把你的经历告诉你的笔友Edward。词数80词左右。开头已给,不计入总词数。

提示 1.上周我们在黄山湖公园（the Huangshan Lake Park）举行了风筝节。

2.我们花了一小时徒步走到公园。进入公园后,我们朝沙滩走去。

3.抬头一看,看到有很多风筝在天上飞。我们从书包里拿出了风筝。

4.一些同学在湖边放风筝,另一些在树下搭起了帐篷。

5. 我们还享受了很多美食。我们……

注意：第五点必须要用2-3句展开合理想象,作适当发挥。

Dear Edward,

____________________________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________

All the best

John

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Edward,

Last week, we held a Kite Festival in the Huangshan Lake Park. It took us an hour to walk to the park. After entering the park, we walked towards the beach. We looked up and saw many kites flying in the sky. We took the kites out of our schoolbags. Some students flew kites near the lake, and others put up tents under the tree. We also enjoyed lots of delicious food. We found it interesting to fly kites. We had a good time there. We think it is wonderful.

All the best

John

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文叫小作者用英语写一封电子邮件把你的经历告诉你的笔友Edward。在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如We looked up and saw many kites flying in the sky. We took the kites out of our schoolbags. Some students flew kites near the lake, and others put up tents under the tree. We also enjoyed lots of delicious food. We found it interesting to fly kites.等等。