Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你搬到了一个新的街区，请写信给你的好友Lucy向他她描述一下：1.你家在哪及怎么去你家。（使用方位介词描述一下在什么街道上，附近有些什么标志性的建筑物等）2.介绍你新认识的邻居家的好朋友Becky.(名字，性别，穿着，外貌，喜欢和她成为朋友的原因)。 文章必须包含上述内容，且不少于70字。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Lucy,

I am glad to know that you will come to my home. My new home is 5 kilometers from our school.It is next to the police station on the Bridge Street. You can take No.1 Bus and get off at the police station. Then you walk along the street and you can see the supermarket.And my new home is behind it.I have a new friend here. Her name is Becky. She is a tall and thin boy. She often wears blue coat and black trousers. She likes reading books. We have the same hobby. So we often talk about our favorite books.We are good friends.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍给好友Lucy写信介绍自己新家的地址以及邻居家的好友Becky。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am glad to...，My new home is ...，She is ...,We are ...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头很高兴Lucy来自己的新家，接下来介绍我新家的位置和如何来我的新家，最后介绍邻居家的好友Becky。此处be glad to, next to, get off, like doing sth, the same, talk about等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。