Question

【题目】文段表达（共10分）

假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom要来北京和你一起过寒假。请你写信告诉他北京的天气情况、你通常在假期都做什么以及你的感受。（图片信息仅供参考）

要求：50个词左右。

Dear Tom，

I am glad that you will come to Beijing!

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Best wishes.

Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom，

I’m glad that you will come to Beijing!

Beijing is a modern and beautiful city. It’s cold and windy in winter，so you had better wear your warm coats.

I like playing basketball with my good friends in the morning during winter vacation. That helps me full of energy. In the afternoon I often play chess or watch TV to relax. I usually do my homework and read books in the evening. I love winter vacation because I have time to relax.

I can’t wait to meet you in Beijing.

Best wishes.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文通过图片给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头和结尾。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文用准确的语句表达了图片中的每一个要点，格式正确，段落清晰。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.