题目内容
【题目】假如你叫雷。下面的图画讲述了你和一位男孩在上周发生的事情。请根据图画写出一篇日记。日记的开头已经给出(不计入词数)。
要求：1. 日记应包括图画中所有内容。可适当发挥,使短文完整、通顺。
2. 词数：60词以上。
Tuesday October 8, 2013 Fine
When I got to school this morning, __________________________________________________
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【答案】Tuesday October 8, 2013 Fine
When I got to school this morning, I saw a little boy fall off his bike and lie on the road. He was badly hurt and couldn’t move, so I carried him to the hospital. After school I bought some flowers to visit him. There I found that he was almost fine. The next day, by the time I got to school, the little boy had been there waiting for me for a long time. He said “Thank you!” to me. I was very happy, because I can help others. I want to be a volunteer some day.
【解析】此篇书面表达是以日记的形式介绍磊上学时发生的故事。由提示可知文章为一般过去时为主，写作时按事件发生的顺序。注意动词过去式的构成。写作时使用了被动语态及主从复合句。
