Question

【题目】【2012年重庆】

假如你校有几位来自美国的交换生，他们打算周末步行去翠湖公园。请根据提示为他们写出前往的路线，并简介公园情况。

要点提示：校对

1．路线(见右图)；

2．

3．……

要求：

1．词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

Cuihu Park is not far from here. It's easy to get there. Just go straight

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Answer 1

【答案】

Cuihu Park is not far from here. It's easy to get there. Just go straight and turn right at the first corner. Walk along the road and turn left when you find a hospital. Cuihu Park is down the street on your right. Across from the park is a restaurant.

The park is really a good place to have fun. It’s beautiful and cool with the trees and flowers. You can swim and play games or have a picnic there. It’s very relaxing. You my also get a good chance to practice Chinese. I hope you will enjoy yourselves.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文考查体裁为说明文，要求写出去翠湖公园的路线，并简介公园情况。时态可用一般现在时。

写作要点：1. 去翠湖公园的路线2. 简介公园情况。公园环境优美、凉爽，还可游泳、野餐等；3. 表达祝福的心愿。

【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语，如：far from, It is easy to do sth. go straight, turn left, at the first corner, on your right, across from, have fun, play games, have a picnic, enjoy yourselves等。这为短文增色不少。