Question

【题目】书面表达

为丰富初三学生课余生活，上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动。请根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍此次活动，并谈谈自己的感想。

活动内容：

1．上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念；

2．下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。

你的感想：

1．师生情深，感谢老师和同学的帮助；

2．倍受鼓舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国；

3. ……（考生自己发挥）

要求：

1．词数100左右。开头已给出，不计人总词数。

2．所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息，并可作适当的发挥。

3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

参考词汇：市民广场Civic Square

In order to enrich Junior 3 students' after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it.

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Answer 1

【答案】In order to enrich Junior 3 students' after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. In the morning, we visited the People’s Park. In the park, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery, danced and sang, and took pictures. I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. In the afternoon, we visited the Citizen’s Square. In People's Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. After seeing these photo exhibitions, I was inspired and determined to study hard to serve my country.

【解析】

这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下上周末你校所组织的一次社会实践活动。所提供的材料中列举了活动内容和你的感想。主要从：1．上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念；2．下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。以及表达师生情深，感谢老师和同学的帮助；倍受鼓舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国；（自己在发挥一些）。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. 我要感谢我的老师和同学们的帮助。

该句话用到了would like to do sth. 丰富了语言。

【高分句型二】

In People's Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. 在人民广场，我们看了70年来的摄影展，了解了祖国和家乡的巨大变化。该句话的语言简练，层次分明，语意明确，用简单的句子表达了丰富的内涵。使人读起来郎朗上口。