题目内容
【题目】似如你是李华, 一个英国游学团要来你们学校, 学校需要一些志愿者, 你想成为其中的一员。请读下面的招雾启事, 写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Some students from the UK will come to our school to have a study tour. They are interested in Chinese culture. We’ relooking for some volunteers to help us.
"Can you introduce yourself(English ability and personality)?
Can you plan an activity about Chinese culture and explain your purpose?
If you are interested, please email us at Andrew@l63. com.
注意:
1)请回复招募启事中所提及的两个问题, 可适当发挥;
2)应征邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息;
3)词数: 80~100;
4)邮件开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Andrew,
I’m Li Hua.
【答案】例文
Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua.I'm a 17-year-old girl from Class 3 , Grade 2. I would like to become a volunteer for theAmerican students.(点明目的)My English is good and I can talk with foreigner fluently. In addition, I'm interested in sports, which is whyI'm in good health.【高分句型一】When my friends get in trouble, I often help them actively. I'm good at taking up with others. Besides, I like travelling a lot and I'm quite familiar with our city.(自我介绍)I plan to organize an activity about Chinese traditional culture so that British friends canunderstand China better.【高分句型二】(计划的活动)
I'm sure I can become friends with theEnglish students. Looking forward to your answers.(愿望)
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们根据题目中给出的招聘启事,写一封应聘的邮件,加入学校的志愿者队伍。写前,先仔细阅读题目中的招聘启事,弄清楚招聘的背景以及需要的条件。审题可知,短文应使用一般现在时、第一人称来叙述。文章的主要内容包括:首先点明自己写信的目的;然后以招聘启事中的两个问题为线索,介绍自己的基本情况,展示自己的能力;最后重申自己想要成为志愿者的愿望,希望自己能被接受。写作时应注意:首先要合理组织文章内容,安排各部分内容所占的篇幅,分清层次和结构,主次要分明。并且应将题目中要求的信息都包括在内,不要遗漏要点。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不能按照汉语思维,逐词翻译,写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构出发,选择恰当的句型、词汇和短语进行表达。句式结构可以简单句为基础,穿插并列句或复合句以及其他高级句型,提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意衔接自然,表达流畅。