Question

【题目】假如你是李华，正在美国参加一个交换生项目。你想申请所在学校的某一社团，请你写一份申请，说明你想参加什么社团，为什么想参加这个社团以及你自身的优势。

提示词语： singing, chess, interested, confident, friends

提示问题：●What club do you want to join?

●Why do you want to join this club?

●What makes you the right person for this club?

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Thank you for considering my application and I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours.

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m writing to apply for the singing club because I love singing and many people say I have a beautiful voice.

Since the third grade, I’ve been a member of the school choir.We trained very hard, and our performance was a real hit at the New Year’s celebration last year. From my experiences, I have gained self-confidence and friendship. I think I have a good sense of music and I can get along well with others. So I am the right person for this club.

I really hope that I can join this club to share beautiful music with others.

Thank you for considering my application and I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给学校的某个社团写一封申请信，说明你想加入该社团，并说明原因以及自身的优势。这是一封申请信，在信中应主要包括以下内容：你是谁？你想做什么？你为什么要这么做？以及你想参加社团的话，你具备什么优势可以让社团同意你的申请。写作时，应按照这个提纲将具体的内容补充完整，串联成文。除写作内容外，还需要注意语法上的问题，注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要写汉语式的英语，多使用平时积累的句型和短语，用简单的句子表达完整的意思。高级句型可以使用，来调整文章的结构，提升文章的档次。同时注意使用正确的时态和人称。