Question

【题目】书面表达。

假设你是Betty, 你的外国笔友Linda 准备来中国旅游，不知道去哪里好。请你给她回一封Email.

要求： 推荐给Linda 适合旅游的地点，并说明理由，同时给出一些建议或者注意事项。字数：70词左右。

Dear Linda,

I think you’ll have a good time in China!

Yours,

Betty

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Linda,

I’m very glad to receive your letter. I hear that you will come to China. I am very happy. There are many places of interest in China. But I want you to come to Beijing. Beijing is our capital city. It has a long history and is a modern city. If you come to Beijing ,you can go to the Summer palace. It is very beautiful. You can also go to the Great Wall. And you can go to the Forbidden City to learn about old China. You’d better travel by subway because there is always traffic jam on the road. Taking subway is more convenient. And I can be your guide if you come to Beijing. You can live with my family. Hope to see you soon.

I think you’ll have a good time in China!

Yours,

Betty

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以Betty的身份给Linda写一封信，因为Linda要来中国旅游，她不知道去哪里，我们应在短文中给她一些建议，并说明理由，告诉她一些注意事项。这是一篇开放性的作文，题目中只给了写作的话题，但是具体的内容还需要学生们自己补充完整，自己去完善，这对于学生们而言是一个难点。写作时，还应注意使用正确的时态和人称，注意英语的表达规范，不要逐句翻译，写汉语式的英语。还应使用一些平时积累的好的词或短语，在句子之间使用一些连词，使文章的意思连贯，表达流畅。

写作亮点：这是一篇较好的英语作文。短文里按照题目的要求，给Linda推荐了来中国旅游的目的地，并阐述了理由，提醒Linda一些注意事项。短文的内容比较完整，符合题目的要求，使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，语言准确。短文里使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如There are many places of interest in China. But I want you to come to Beijing.、If you come to Beijing ,you can go to the Summer palace、You’d better travel by subway because there is always traffic jam on the road.、Taking subway is more convenient等，这些句型的使用非常正确，也提高了文章的档次。