题目内容
【题目】书面表达(本大题共10分)
近几年,微信( Wechat)变得时尚而受欢迎,给我们的生活带来了很大的影响。请根据
以下要点,写一篇以微信( Wechat)为题的短文,阐述你对微信的看法。内容要点如下:
1. 过去我们常常写信,发邮件与他人交流,而现在越来越多的人使用微信;
2. 微信可以发语音,文本信息和图片,视频(video);
3. 微信使大家交友更容易,还能快速分享自己的经历;
4. 但是,也带来一些困扰,视频聊天,不利于学习,微信交友,并不安全……..
5. 你对使用微信的态度。
注意:词数在90词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数,第四,五可作适当发挥。
In recent years, Wechat is becoming fashionable and popular. It has made a difference to our
daily life.
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【答案】
In recent years, WeChat is becoming fashionable and popular. It has made a difference to our daily life. We used to get in touch(communicate) with each other by letters and emails, but now more and more people are using WeChat. We can send voice and text messages through WeChat as well as pictures and videos easily. By using it, making friends is becoming easier. And we can share our life experiences faster. However, there are also some problems. Using WeChat too often is not good for students’ study. And it is not safe for students to make friends by WeChat . I think WeChat is helpful to us, but we should always be careful. (96words)
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲作文。要求写一篇以微信( Wechat)为题的短文,阐述你对微信的看法。题目给出了一些要点。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成此类作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
写作亮点:文章使用了很好的短语和句子:used to 过去常常,曾经;more and more越来越多的; as well as也,又,以及; However 然而。I think WeChat is helpful to us, but we should always be careful.这句话使用了主从复合句和并列句。