Question

16．醉酒驾车，已经成为严重的社会问题，越来越受到人们的关注，根据下面提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈你的看法．

现象	许多人不遵守交通规则，仍酒后驾车，对自己和他人的安全不负责任
后果	因为酒后驾车，给自己和他人和很多家庭带来伤害
建议	为了自己和他人的安全，呼吁司机不要酒后驾车，呼吁更多严格的规则和制度出台

提示词：酒后驾车drunk driving  不负责的 irresponsible  交通事故 traffic accident   对…造成伤害   do harm t
                                                               

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是谈谈醉酒驾车的现象后果及建议，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1 现象：许多人不遵守交通规则，仍酒后驾车，对自己和他人的安全不负责任
2 后果：因为酒后驾车，给自己和他人和很多家庭带来伤害
3 建议：为了自己和他人的安全，呼吁司机不要酒后驾车，呼吁更多严格的规则和制度出台
常用到的重点短语：
do harm to 对…有害
in order to  为了…
had better do sth 最好做某事
obey the rules 遵守规则
ask sb for help 请求某人的帮忙
be supposed to  应该

【高分句型】
1．Thousands of people were killed and many more were injured every year．
were killed 和were injured 是一般过去时的被动语态was/were+过去分词
2．If you drink too much，you shouldn't drive by yourself．
if引导的条件状语从句，主句含有情态动词should，从句用一般现在时代替一般将来时．

解答 Everyone should obey the traffic rules．Yet there are still many people drunk driving．It's irresponsible（不负责任的） not only to the drivers themselves but also the others．
   Many drivers drive very fast in the street，or even in the crowded traffic while they are drunk．Drunk drivers caused a lot of accidents．（现象）Thousands of people were killed and many more were injured every year．【高分句型】It has done great harm to quite a few families．（后果）
   In order to keep the public safe，we shouldn't drunk drive．We must obey the traffic rules．If you drink too much，you shouldn't drive by yourself．【高分句型】You'd better take a taxi or ask others for help．The government is supposed to make more serious rules and laws as soon as possible（ 建议 ）

点评 图表类作文写作之前考生首先要认真审题，确定文章的中心．表格内容要全部包括在作文中，词数要符合要求．句式表达要正确，注意句子的主谓宾、主系表等结构．文章结构要清晰．考生在平时的英语学习中需牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理，也可为文章增色不少．