题目内容
【题目】 书面表达
假如你叫王若琪,今天上午你带着宠物狗Coco散步时遇到一位外国人,他看上去很着急,你上前询问后,得知他找不到去火车站的路,于是你帮助了他……
请你根据以上内容用英语写一篇日记,记叙所发生的事情并描述你的心理感受。词数90左右,日记的格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Thursday, October 1st
Today was the first day of the National Day holiday.
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【答案】Thursday, October 1st
Today was the first day of the National Day holiday. In the morning when I was taking a walk with my pet dog Coco along the street, I met a foreigner. He was looking around and looked worried. I went over to him and asked him what I could do for him. He told me he couldn’t find the way to the train station. I showed him the right way. He thanked me and went away happily.
I was very proud of myself because I could speak English and I could help a foreigner in trouble. This made me feel very happy!
【解析】这篇作文要求我们写一篇日记,记叙自己帮助了一个外国人的事情。日记记叙的都是已经发生的事情,所以这篇短文应使用一般过去时态来叙述,注意谓语动词形式的变化,尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。题目中只给出了事情的大概,而具体的内容需要学生们自己来补充,因此写作时,应注意组织语言,完整的叙述事情的经过,并描述自己的心理感受。还应注意的是英语的表达习惯和语法规范,英语的句式与汉语是不同的,所以写作时不应逐词翻译,而应从句子的整体考虑,使用恰当的单词和句型,写符合英语表达习惯的句子,以简单句为主,辅以并列句和复合句,增强文章的节奏,并注意上下文意的连贯和流畅。