题目内容
【题目】在我们成长的道路,朋友是不可或缺的那道风景。在相知相伴的岁月里,留下了多少美好的故事和难忘的回忆! 某英语报社以"A Story Between My Friend and Me"为题开展征文活动,请你按要求用英语写一篇文章参赛。
要求:1. 故事必须原创;
2. 80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考要点:1. 分享故事(起因,经过,结果……);
2. 表达感受(幸福,感动,思考……);
3. ……
A Story between My Friend and Me
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【答案】A Story between My Friend and Me
There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. One thing happened in the past had a deep influence on me.
Here is the story. On a rainy day, I suddenly fell down and hurt myself badly. My left leg was broken. So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study. Then my friend Mingming came to see me. When he knew about that, he said he could help me with my study. On hearing this, I didn’t feel worried any more. From that day on, he taught me every day. I was so moved. I didn’t fall behind the other students with Mingming’s help. I thanked him a lot.
In my opinion, friends are very important in our life. No matter what happen, true friends will always be friends.
【解析】本书面表达要求以"A Story Between My Friend and Me"为题写一篇文章,根据题目要求知道应该写一篇记叙文,同时必须完成相应的要点内容,作文的关键是回忆,因此它的基准时态应该以过去时态为主,即一、二要点,而第三点发表自己对朋友的看法或观点,应该用一般现在时来叙述。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用,使文意连接紧密,还要注意使用丰富的语句,注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。
【亮点说明】
本文结构紧凑,语言简练。文中had a deep influence on, fell down, worried about, help me with my study, fall behind, in my opinion, No matter, and,so等词(组)的恰当使用,使上下文意连接紧密;本文还采用了丰富的句型,比如:宾语从句、时间状语从句、No matter引导的让步状语从句等,大大增加了信息的容量,使文章增色不少,这是一篇不错的范文。