Question

【题目】我们生活学习在美丽的甘肃。假设你所在的学校正在组织一个“让世界了解甘肃、让甘肃走向世界＂的活动，请根据以下思维导图的提示，以" The Introduction of Gansu Province"为题，写一篇介绍甘肃的英语短文。

要求:1.文中需包含思维导图中的主要内容;

2.句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写规范;

3.可做适量拓展;

4.词数:80词左右。(标题需抄写在答题卡对应作答区域，不计入总词数)

Answer 1

【答案】例文

The Introduction of Gansu Province

Gansu Province lies in the northwest of China. It covers an area of 425,900 square kilometers.There are 26 million people living there. Lanzhou is the capital city of Gansu Province. The weather in Gansu is different from place to place and the temperature is usually quite different from day to night. If you want to go travelling in Gansu, May to October is the best time. Mogao Grotto which is the world famous art palace and Jiayuguan Pass, the western end of the Great Wall, are two of the must-see places of interest in Gansu.

【解析】

本文属于材料作文，介绍甘肃省。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如lie in, there be, the capital city of, be different from, end of, places of interest以及which引导的定语从句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。