Question

【题目】书面表达。

根据图示，简要介绍一下如何才能保持健康，并展开想象，适当发挥。要求：词数90个左右。短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

All of us want to be healthy._____________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以健康为话题，谈一谈在生活中应该如何保持健康。题目中给了我们一个图示，通过这个图示我们可以看到，想要保持健康，我们应做好三个方面，一是要多运动，然后是要有足够的睡眠，最后是注意饮食习惯。我们也可以发挥自己的想象，补充一些内容。通过分析可知，这篇作文我们应使用一般现在时态，第一人称We来叙述。写作时，除了注意短文的内容之外，还需要注意表达要符合英语的表达习惯，多使用一些自己平时积累的好的短语和句型，使短文更加流畅、连贯。

写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的范文，短文中作者根据题目要求，加上自己的合理想象，跟我们讲述了如何保持健康。首先作者点明了健康的重要性，然后作者从四个方面讲述了如何做我们才能保持健康。短文的结构很清楚，意思也很完整。另外在表达时，作者使用了较多的句式和句型，不仅准确，而且这些句型的使用增强了文章的流畅性。例如Staying up late is bad for our health.、We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat.、Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies.、If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.等。