Question

【题目】文段表达

根据中文和英文提示，用英文写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的邮件。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

66.假如你叫魏明，你的美国笔友Mike通过邮件，想知道在生活中谁是你的榜样？请你向Mike介绍：你的榜样是谁？你的家人朋友、老师或同学…….他/她的性格如何？为什么你认为他（她）是你的榜样，你从他/她身上学到了什么？

提示词语：role model, kind, helpful, help, work hard, hope

Answer 1

【答案】

My role model Jack is kind and helpful.

At school, he studies so hard that he often gets good grades in exams. However, I am not good at studying, so he not only helps me with my homework about every subject but also tells me to work hard in order that I can catch up with others as soon as possible. With his help, I have made great progress in my study and I thank him very much.

I think I’m lucky to have Jack as an example. From now on, I’ll never give up and try my best to study better and better. I hope I can do as well as Jack and be respected by others.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲式作文。要求考生按照题目的要求，写一篇连贯的文章。短文要包含提示所有信息，要做到语句通顺、意思连贯，主旨健康，中心突出但同时切记不能完全照抄原文的翻译。此外，考生在进行写作的时候，要注意写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，使文章的内容更生动。

写作亮点：完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。复合句的使用 “so he not only helps me with my homework about every subject but also tells me to work hard in order that I can catch up with others as soon as possible.”可看出学生的写作功底非常深厚。