题目内容
14.朋友情深,友谊无价.在与朋友交往的过程中,你认为什么是最重要的?是以诚相待、彼此信任,还是…?目前,你校校刊正在就此话题开展征文活动,请你结合自己的经历,写一篇英语短文,谈谈看法.内容提示:(1)What is the most important about friendship?
(2)Share your experience
要求:(1)中心突出,语义连贯,层次清晰,书写规范;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
(3)词数80左右.
Asweallknow,friendsareimportantforusinourdailylife.Andeveryoneneedsfriends.Friend meansapersonwhogetsonwellwithyouandhelpsyou.Ithinkthemostimportantaboutfriendship ishelpfulMybestfriendisJack.Weareclassmatessincewewenttoschoolabout9yearsago.We always help each other.WhenIamhappy,Jackishappy.WhenJackissad,Ialsofeeldown.Wearegoodfriendsandwethinkourfriendshipwilllastlong.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Let'shelpothersandhavemorefriends..
分析 高分句型一
Friend means a person who gets on well with you and helps you.朋友是指和你相处得很好并且帮助你的人.who gets on well with you and helps you是一个定语从句,先行词是 person.
高分句型二
When I am happy,Jack is happy.当我快乐的时候,杰克是快乐的.这是when引导的时间状语从句,当…时候.
解答 As we all know,friends are important for us in our daily life.And everyone needs friends.Friend means a person who gets on well with you and helps you【高分句型一,注意定语从句的使用】.I think the most important about friendship is helpful.【要点一,友谊的重要性】
My best friend is Jack.We are classmates since we went to school about 9 years ago.We always help each other.When I am happy,Jack is happy.【高分句型二,注意时间状语的使用】When Jack is sad,I also feel down.We are good friends and we think our friendship will last long.【要点二,分享经验】
A friend in need is a friend indeed.Let's help others and have more friends.
点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点,不可遗漏.需在平时积累相关的词汇,写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑
关系.上下文之间可以适当使用连接词.如but,so,then等.
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| A. | Well done | B. | Take it easy | C. | So am I | D. | I hope not |