Question

5．最近你们班就"低碳"生活方式进行了讨论，你认为的"低碳"生活方式是什么．请你用英语一篇文章，说说你的"低碳"生活．

注意：1．根据提示适当发挥；
2．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名；
3．词数80左右 （开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）．
My Low Carbon Life
We can do a lot in our daily life to live alow carbon life．In my daily life，I always turn off lights if possible andspend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet．Saving water also matters much．Besides，I often sort the rubbish，hoping that we might recycle some，which will surely benefit us a great deal．In addition，I usually use handkerchiefs instead of tissues in order to prevent more trees from being cut down．More importantly，when I go out，walking，riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice，which contributes to a cleaner world．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In my daily life，I always turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet．
句中涉及的短语有："turn off 关闭"、"spend+时间+（in） doing sth  在…上花费多少时间"．这句话意为：在日常生活中，如果可能的话我总是关灯，并且少看点儿电视，少上点儿网．
高分句型二：
In addition，I usually use handkerchiefs instead of tissues in order to prevent more trees from being cut down．
句中短语有"in addition 另外"、"instead of 代替，而不是"、"in order to do sth 为了做某事"、"prevent sb from doing sth 阻止…做…"、"cut down 砍倒"．这句话意为：另外，为了避免更多的树被砍，我通常用手帕代替纸巾．

解答 My Low Carbon Life
We can do a lot in our daily life to live alow carbon life．（开篇点题）
In my daily life，I always turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet．【高分句型一】Saving water also matters much．Besides，I often sort the rubbish，hoping that we might recycle some，which will surely benefit us a great deal．In addition，I usually use handkerchiefs instead of tissues in order to prevent more trees from being cut down．【高分句型二】More importantly，when I go out，walking，riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice，which contributes to a cleaner world．（我的低碳生活）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．